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hello songwriters,
I'm honnest i'm not a songwriter but i'm trying to write a song for my best girlfriend beceause i don't find the right song.
I hope you can help me to make this song a little better. These words make me think about the girl.
(sorry for bad english).

song:
I'm not a good singer mhmhmhmhmh. Yea i know but i want to try just for you and i don't know why but you are so special for me even i don't know what it means. I want give up I want give up to find the right words when I think about you. I may be a little bit crazy but for you i'm not affraid to try and fly right trough the sky.

I hope somebody can make it better because this girls means so mutch for me and i wan't to surprise here.
thanks

[Sellon]

Give this to her instead.

its called Just For You.
And I wrote it. change it as much as you like, I took out some parts to make it seem better and not so lovey.

I said i'll be your light in the dark
I'll be the fire to your spark
I'll make sure that the fire in our hearts and our eyes
Never dies
I'll be there to keep you warm
I'll be the calm before the storm
And if the storm comes I'll be there to protect you
I just wanna be perfect to you

I'm not trying to start a revolution
I'm trying to find a solution
If I tear it down
And tape it back up
To make something better out of us
I could make this into a work of art
Out of all the love that is in our hearts
In our hearts
In our hearts

Speak up
Speak loud
Let me know you'll stay around
Because for once I've got my feet on the ground
All I want is for you to love me
You can taste it on my lips
As I come to grips
With reality
You are my gravity
I'm finally free
I'm where I want to be

I'm not trying to start a revolution
I'm trying to find a solution
If I tear it down
And tape it back up
To make something better out of us
I could make this into a work of art
Out of all the love that is in our hearts
In our hearts
In our hearts

So open your eyes
This is just for you
To tell you that I really do love you
And without you I'd be mess
You've turned me into my very best
And you know I think you're the one
But I think you might have guessed
So please don't say your done
Cause you're the only thing keeping me here
So tell me that I'm in the clear

I'm not trying to start a revolution
I'm trying to find a solution
If I tear it down
And tape it back up
To make something better out of us
I could make this into a work of art
Out of all the love that is in our hearts
In our hearts
In our hearts