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You Could Have Been My Love

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mstesson

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« on: February 26, 2023, 01:46:22 PM »
Hi songwriters,

I have just uploaded a new song called "You Could Have Been My Love".

Would be thankful for feedback on this composition.


CorkingCrackBand

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« Reply #1 on: February 26, 2023, 04:12:27 PM »
Hi @mstesson,

  I enjoyed your vocal and the song in general. I got a real 80s power ballad vibe. I thought you nailed the ending - it suited the song perfectly.
 I’m sure others, when you get time, would appreciate your feedback back on their ditties, too.  :)

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mstesson

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« Reply #2 on: February 27, 2023, 07:46:01 AM »
Thanks for the feedback!
I will check out other songs.

kevysc

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« Reply #3 on: February 27, 2023, 01:02:09 PM »
@mstesson Nice power ballad feel. Would recommend you also check out @shadowfax 's work, he's a master at the power ballads! Also, it's a good idea to post lyrics with your song.

Kevin

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« Reply #4 on: March 02, 2023, 02:19:33 PM »
I like this one, as mentioned before I was getting an 80s ballad vibe to it but also my imagination was thinking this could be tweaked here and there with a more modern sound and would be great for a boy band. Anyway it's a really solid piece of work so well done.