[tomlinleckie]

 Hi guys, I've been very naughty for not coming on the forum; spent the last week with my in-laws up North. Would love to hear what you think about the Song;

Here you go
stuck in the groove
looking for some indication
that you took the right route
your greatest fear
is misinformation
not knowing you're close
to the final destination

And so you've always been
chasing other dreams
never trying to find
the only thing you need

opportunity
always passed you by
too busy making your own luck
to see the chances flying by
I hope that you might find
some kind of resolution
look around you now
and find your own solution

And so you've always been
chasing other dreams
never trying to find
the only thing you need

If you took a moment
to look up to the sky
you'd see the answers flying by
if you took a moment
to reach up there for them
your problems would be at an end

Okay now
you could have stuck to the same path
but look at you now
you're the one who gets to have the last laugh

[nooms]

hi tomlin, welcome to february..
sounds cool, nice groove, can imagine some percussive drums and electric piano on it...
gtr and vocals on the nail but think need more colour in there, coupla mystery chord surprises..a little variation, not a lot happens other than the groove of it..
im sure you can wind it up a bit more...

all the best,
nooms

[Arturo Boyero]

Very nice!

I like the summer vibe of it. I think that if you changed the music a little in the "If you took a moment..." part, you could make it even richer.