Thanks everyone - I am a bit in love with this song, and really grateful to
@PaulyX without whom it would not have appeared anything like this (or at all).
@kafla really glad you liked it. I know what you mean about the first story - could have been an option. For the vocal I tried to choose the most "emotional" take - not the best recorded or skilfull... Anyhow, thanks for the great comments
@moraamarolaloba thanks for the detailed comments (yes the voice is probably a bit "dry")
@shadowfax thanks a million - plaintive is a good description
@Wicked deeds thanks for the review - the vocal is very close mic'ed and imperfect which probably adds to the old school feel...
@ChrisPrice many thanks for listening - I guess this could be part of a "Teenage Opera". The words are an important part of the package in this case (but if they didn't come over then that's my fault)
@MonnoDB many thanks indeed - I think that line was started off by @Paulyx and finished by me - isn't collaboration great!?
@PaulAds nice to see you back in these parts. Nice to stir things up a bit - I was going for "just woke enough"...
@pompeyjazz @IronKnee @skub
@crystalsuzy @seriousfun @Dorian @Bostonfan2 many thanks for listening and great comments
Thanks again to everyone - great to get comments from new and old forumites
