[DrRobert]

Hi everyone

We have just finished recording this song and would love any feedback you have

https://on.soundcloud.com/NCSUXC1z7FZGzDSZ9

G6         D.                     Cadd9
catch the silver sunlight here tonite
get on the bus you can be my soul
i wanna be the fighter in your corner
just take you by the hand and let it roll...

Em.                                   D
so take the river crossing feel the rise
hold on the barriers in the frozen skies

Asus4.         
'cause d'you know where we'll go?
Cadd9.                  D
how we'll know? i dont know but we'll be free!!

G6.         D.             Cadd9
oh... i wanna be the conqueror
upon a revolutionary road to cease her
getting old we'll live forever
you can take me high upon the mountain

Em.                          Asus4
'cause all your faith in my place
Cadd9.                                 D
we can be what we believe...

G6.            D.                     Cadd9
so catch the silver sunlight here tonite
just feel the rush and let the good times roll
gonna be the fighter in your corner
i'l take you by the hand you could be my soul...

Em.                                   D
so take the river crossing feel the rise
hold on the barriers in the frozen skies

Asus4
'cause d'you know where we'll go?
Cadd9.                                 D
how we'll know? i dont know but we'll be free!!

G6.         D.             Cadd9
oh... i wanna be the conqueror
upon a revolutionary road to cease her
getting old we'll live forever
you can take me high upon the mountain

Asus4
so you know where we'll go?
Cadd9.                                 D
now we'll know! close your eyes yeah we'll be free!!

G6.        D.             Cadd9
oh... i wanna be the conqueror
upon a revolutionary road to cease her
getting old we'll live forever
you can take me high upon the mountain

Em.                          Asus4
'cause all your faith in my place
Cadd9.                                 D
we can be what we believe...

[PaulyX]

Hi, welcome to the forum, hope you like it here.
I liked your track... once upon a time I spent a whole summer listening to Grant Lee Buffalo and this song reminded me a bit of that summer... I think it is that Americana, wide screen melancholy feeling you've got going on.  Lyrics are nicely vague - gave me plenty of space to interpret the song in my own way, and free from cheesy rhymes (in fact, you don't work too hard to make it rhyme that much anyway... which works well in this one I think).  Maybe the vocal sits a little proud in the mix?  But apart from that I really enjoyed it.  Please stick around, post some reviews and post some more of your tracks.