[CK2020]

hi guys heres a lo fi psychedelic piano pop song i did. most prolly wont like it but id appreciate any feedback even if its bad ! thanks

[PaulyX]

Hi there.  There's a lot of sheep on the forum at the minute...
I liked this.  It's nicely weird.  Reminded me quite a lot of Spiritualised, or Spiritualised being fronted by Shane McGowan, produced by Mark E Smith... I like that combo of trad folky influences and something a bit more psyche and stoner here.
I can't make out the lyrics at all (maybe you should post them here?) but I like the effects you've used on the voice.  And I dig how 'indie' it sounds - you haven't tried to make it pop at all... no cliches in sight.
The video was cool too - freaked me out a bit, I guess that was the intention.

[CK2020]

yeah i noticed there was another sheep song on the forum haha. Glad you enjoyed this tune as i know its not gonna be to everyones taste and i like all the bands/artists youve mentioned so im happy with that ! i will post the lyrics underneath if it helps make it more intelligible ! thanks for the comment anyways much appreciated

HEY NOW NOW
THERES REALLY NO WAY OUT
THE HUMAN CAUGHT A BURGER
AND  TURNED INTO A COW
YOU KNOW THERE IS A WAY
DONT MATTER WHAT THEY SAY
AND I SHALL SIT HERE WRITING
TIL WE REACH MY DYING DAY
I SAY

 

THEY DONT KNOW
THE TRUTH THE LIES
AND THEY DONT KNOW
OR REALISE
WHEN THE FEAR GETS DONE
YOU KNOW ITS ALL THE SAME
YOU KNOW ITS ALL

 

STUMBLE THRU THE DARK
WHIEL WORKIN IN A GOLD MINE
IM SITTING HERE
JUST TRYING TO MAKE UP MY MIND

GOLD AND SILVER TURNS

WHILE WAITING ON A BUS
THEY SAY ITS NEVER GETTING BETTER

IT ONLY GETS WORSE

 

THEY DONT KNOW
THE TRUTH THE LIES
AND THEY DONT KNOW
OR REALISE
WHEN THE FEAR GETS DONE
YOU KNOW ITS ALL THE SAME
YOU KNOW ITS ALL THE SAME

 

HERE I AM
NAKED AS DAY
CAN YOU HEAR ME
AND WHAT I SAY?

 

TRIED TO GET A GRIP
AND CONTROL THE SITUATION
A TINY SALVE FOR TINY MINDS
JUST LEADING TO FRUSTRATION

WERE PAST THE PEAK OF HUMAN
WHILE LIVING IN REVERSE

YOU CALL OUT FOR A TAXI

AND THEY SEND OUT A HEARSE

GETS WORSE

 

THEY DONT KNOW
THE TRUTH THE LIES
THEY DESPISE AND
CRITICIZE
WHEN THE RACE IS RUN
YOU KNOW ITS ALL THE SAME
ITS REALLY ALL THE SAME