[Sebandme]

Wrote this..... This afternoon before work....

Just wanna get the vibe off people if that's OK.... Its only a verse and chorus that gone around few times.

Listen to come along now by Sebastian And Me on #SoundCloud
https://on.soundcloud.com/aKxZW

I've not recored the words for 2nd verse as I've done while out at work.

Anyway any input be helpful 

We don't need nothing
We don't need anything
We can just make this work.
So go and grab your things
And I'll wait in the car yeah,
We can just dissappear.

Come along now
Come along now
Come along now
Come along now

We can chase rainbows
See where the wind blows
Anywhere away from here
It won't really matter
If its sun or showers
We can just make this work.

Come along now
Come along now
Come along now
Come along now

[popitup]

Nice one ! . . . you've got a very catchy pop chorus and verse here . . . the recording is a bit slammed to the max, but I get it's early stages. So, I get this idea it's about young lovers who just want to run away from everything, and make a life together somewhere else . . . you've got a great start, now just tell the story with a few more details to bring the listener inside. If you're able, maybe list to McCartney's "The Back Seat of my Car" . . . lyrically, that's the vibe I'm getting . . . maybe introduce Mom and Dad's point of view, but you only have 4 minutes ? Good luck, I'll circle back . . .