[CK2020]

hi dont post much on this forum but wanted to post this new track i did SHADOWS with a talented singer NellDare. its basically a dream pop song about wasting your time and enjoying it ! anyways would be interested in hearing any feedback or thoughts you have about the songwriting or production   thanks

SO LONG
SITTING HERE
DAY AFTER DAY
AND  YEAR AFTER YEAR
THE LIGHT FLOWS DOWN
THE WINDOWPANE
IM  HERE  IN SIDE
WATCHING SHADOWS

IM JUST WATCHIN SHADOWS FALL
WATCHING SHADOWS ON THE WALL
THERES NO TIME AT ALL
AS SHADOWS FALL
IM JUST WATCHIN SHADOWS FALL
WATCHING SHADOWS ON THE WALL
THERES NO LIGHT AT ALL
WATCHING SHADOWS

ONCE AGAIN,
YOU TOOK
MY TIME
ALL UP
 MY FRIEND
BUT NOW I SEE
 WHEN I SPEAK
THEY ALL WILL HEAR
WITH OPENED EYES
FROM THE DEAD WE RISE

CHORUS
INSTRUMENTAL
REPEAT CHORUS

[moraamarolaloba]

Hola @CK2020

It is a song with an ethereal atmosphere, the instrumentation and the rhythm accompany the story very well as well as the softness of your voice. I also liked the lyrics

Stay well

Mora

[CK2020]

hey mora nice to see you here , i know you from that other forum ! anyways thanks for listening and your thoughts really appreciate it cheers

[ProfessorFalken]

Super chilled out vibe and nicely produced. Can't think of anything to say.

[CK2020]

thanks for listening professor