Where are my hands?

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moraamarolaloba

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« on: July 04, 2022, 12:43:39 PM »
Hola!!! I upe you are having a nice time there!!! Here we are being cooked over a slow fire... But the light of summer and the mixed smells generated by heat are wonderful!

I think this song has summer colors and happy sound, tell me please what do you think!!!
Thank you!

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maybe
when night and day are already company
loneliness becomes a visit that does not bother

and the lights and the shadows
are surrealist painters of life


maybe
I'm already a drawer of yesterday
in which others look for memories

Maybe
 those strange birds
that turn into wisps of  black smoke
as they come out of my mouth,
are the silent cry of my thought,
barren as a soundless instrument

Maybe Maybe  Maybe

Maybe
everything has a meaning beyond this side
everything is maybe right now
a moment that more than a moment
is a sea of ​​questions

Maybe Maybe Maybe
maybe I am the reins of my life
but where are my hands?
I did not know that to live we had to die so many times
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« Reply #1 on: July 04, 2022, 02:44:03 PM »
Super arrangement instrumentally, the tune felt a little forced and maybe a more narrative approach would have worked better, nevertheless your originality is boundless.
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moraamarolaloba

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« Reply #2 on: July 05, 2022, 12:49:41 PM »
Super arrangement instrumentally, the tune felt a little forced and maybe a more narrative approach would have worked better, nevertheless your originality is boundless.

Hola @shadowfax
Thank you for your comment!!!
Stay well there

Mora
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« Reply #3 on: July 06, 2022, 08:30:16 PM »
Hey Mora, I really like the bassy notes that open this... they sound almost out of tune (in a good way... a little disconcerting and therefore atmospheric).  Love some of the surreal imagery in your lyrics here too ... the strange birds turning into wisps of smoke - that's great.  I don't know what it signifies, but it is still great.  And the title is wonderfully odd too... what an intriguing question to ask.
It's all too beautiful.

moraamarolaloba

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« Reply #4 on: July 06, 2022, 09:43:51 PM »
Hey Mora, I really like the bassy notes that open this... they sound almost out of tune (in a good way... a little disconcerting and therefore atmospheric).  Love some of the surreal imagery in your lyrics here too ... the strange birds turning into wisps of smoke - that's great.  I don't know what it signifies, but it is still great.  And the title is wonderfully odd too... what an intriguing question to ask.

Hola @PaulyX
Thank you!!!

Those times when you wanted to explain something but the words were not what you wanted to say and the message is lost, like smoke... Well, nonsense of that hahaha

Stay well

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« Reply #5 on: July 07, 2022, 04:29:12 PM »
Love this:

maybe
I'm already a drawer of yesterday
in which others look for memories

Very clever..

Some great stuff going on in the arrangement / production - that panning is fab! And the flutey synth sound (I hope you know what I mean) is fantastic.  Beats are also great..

As always, it's the mood and atmosphere that shines here..

Wonderful stuff, @moraamarolaloba !!

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« Reply #6 on: July 07, 2022, 08:07:27 PM »
Love this:

maybe
I'm already a drawer of yesterday
in which others look for memories

Very clever..

Some great stuff going on in the arrangement / production - that panning is fab! And the flutey synth sound (I hope you know what I mean) is fantastic.  Beats are also great..

As always, it's the mood and atmosphere that shines here..

Wonderful stuff, @moraamarolaloba !!

K
Hola @MonnoDB
Thank you!!! Sure you are having a good summer!!

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« Reply #7 on: July 10, 2022, 07:41:16 PM »
Hi Mora.

A bright,sunny,happy tune. I'm sitting in the sun listening and it's a perfect match.

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« Reply #8 on: July 13, 2022, 10:13:45 AM »
Hi Mora.

A bright,sunny,happy tune. I'm sitting in the sun listening and it's a perfect match.

Wow!!! You are having a wonderful time there!!! Thank you very much nd stay enjoying !
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« Reply #9 on: July 13, 2022, 06:02:13 PM »
Hi @moraamarolaloba Yes, summer colours and happy sounds for sure. This is quite avant garde with all of the different synth sounds like you use and the the unusual rhythm pattern. I liked some of the clever effects on the vocals processing - Excellent stuff :)

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« Reply #10 on: July 13, 2022, 08:24:32 PM »
Hi @moraamarolaloba Yes, summer colours and happy sounds for sure. This is quite avant garde with all of the different synth sounds like you use and the the unusual rhythm pattern. I liked some of the clever effects on the vocals processing - Excellent stuff :)

Hi @pompeyjazz
Thank you!!!

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« Reply #11 on: September 09, 2022, 10:45:56 PM »
Awesome intro! I stopped the melody and listened to the intro several times.
An interesting song with a beautiful arrangement.
You are my inspiration! :) :) :)

Maya

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« Reply #12 on: September 10, 2022, 01:19:55 PM »
Awesome intro! I stopped the melody and listened to the intro several times.
An interesting song with a beautiful arrangement.
You are my inspiration! :) :) :)

Maya

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Big kiss and have a nice weekend!!
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