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Deliverance! Another old new song

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ProfessorFalken

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« on: June 17, 2022, 11:11:25 AM »
I hope you folks dont mind me posting old songs, but as Im currently without a studio Im very limited in what I can produce creatively. Ive just discovered the Koala Sampler/Sequencer on android and have been dabbling with it on my tablet - if, like me, you like to have variety of approaches to songwritting I highly recommend. So far im just experimenting but hopefully ill have something brand new soon.

Anyway, heres another tune I wrote a while back and Ive chosen it cos I enjoyed @PaulAds and @pompeyjazz blast of rock n roll Garage Conversion. Its not serious at all, just meant to be an OTT bit of fun. The production is a bit messy - but I call it a glorious rock and roll mess.

WARNING! - it does contain a rude word. Making sure I stick to the forum rules by declaring it for the sensitive.

The youtube clip i created for this is a bit of a distraction and seemed like a good idea at the time.

Deliverance!

Ow! ah C'mon Yeah!
Okay now, Brothers! Sisters!
Its our time to rise up,
To reach out,
To break through to the other side,
Cos here, this place is ours,
And right now is our time.
And its time to Roooooooooooooock!!!

Lets go to the place where we can hide,
From the cops and the pimps and the homocide,
We can down JD and toke on the chronic,
Then dance to the music thats really moronic,
And if Ive got the will,
And youve got the money,
The drugs will be good,
Taste as sweet as honey.
So c'mon baby let me hold you tight,
Im gonna rock that body right through the night.

Chorus

I wanna feel the things that others feel,
Lets sell our souls, lets strike a deal.
I want Deliverance!
Deliverance!
Oh come and take a ride with me,
Unlock the gates and set the Devil free,
I want Deliverance!
Deliverance!

Lets tear down the walls that hold us in,
From the love and the hate and the mortal sin,
We can drink and can smoke and make sweet love all night,
Then smash all our fears out of sight,
And if ive got the blood,
And youve got the vision,
The deaths will be cool on a one way mission.
So c'mon baby let me hold you tight,
I'm gonna rock that body right through the night.

Chorus

Deliverance!
Deliverance!
Theres nowhere left for us to go,
Lets burn in Hell in the afterglow,
Deliverance!
Deliverance!








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« Reply #1 on: June 17, 2022, 12:13:42 PM »
Hola @ProfessorFalken

Wow!!! It's really wild!!! Full of rage and dynamic!!!

Stay well
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« Reply #2 on: June 18, 2022, 11:14:18 AM »
Ha! Another winner. I like the modern psych touches… those repetitive hypnotic synths in particular and some of the sound effects. You sound like you had a good time while making it, and I could sense your tongue was slightly in your cheek, so it comes across well… makes you smile whilst headbanging. Made me think of the bands Wooden Shjips and also The Moonlandingz… lovely gonzo indie rock. Right up my alley.
It's all too beautiful.

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« Reply #3 on: June 18, 2022, 12:46:34 PM »
@ProfessorFalken First of all - what a tune! Really gets your feet tapping and head rocking. And I love the lyrics - so darkly fun! Do you have a SoundCloud account or similar you put your work on rather than just YouTube? I'd definitely add this to my SoundCloud playlist!

Gonna have to take another listen...

Philipp

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« Reply #4 on: June 18, 2022, 05:05:38 PM »
One word: wild
The beat i recongnized was good, but what happened to your low end?

I thought youtube had a -14 LUFS agenda. That was subjectivly speaking more. Too much volume and too top end heavy for my taste. And I like it loud
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« Reply #5 on: June 18, 2022, 09:04:26 PM »
Well, that's wild and crazy! Gruesome yet fun!

ProfessorFalken

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« Reply #6 on: July 04, 2022, 08:24:32 AM »
Forgot to thank everyone for their feedback it is appreciated.

So thanks @CaliaMoko  @Philipp @Sterix @PaulyX @moraamarolaloba

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« Reply #7 on: July 04, 2022, 02:47:37 PM »
That'll do for me, played loud and sounds awesome, particularly enjoyed the rude word,
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« Reply #8 on: July 10, 2022, 06:57:01 PM »
Touches of The Screaming Blue Messiahs.

A wild ride! I too miss the bottom end to give it more balls.

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« Reply #9 on: July 13, 2022, 06:34:46 PM »
Yeah ! Great fun this one - Nice and loud and in yer face - Great stuff @ProfessorFalken You're pushing the boundaries man !!

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« Reply #10 on: July 16, 2022, 06:58:14 PM »
Fab! Loved this.. I concur with the others - marvellous in-yer-face magic!

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« Reply #11 on: July 29, 2022, 10:22:55 PM »
Unique and high energetic song. Well done!

Maya

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« Reply #12 on: July 30, 2022, 11:44:26 AM »
Super clear production and no doubt stella video.  I've tried not to watch the video as I don't want it to distract from the audio.  driven along by a strong rhythmic drum track towards the more melodic "come and take a ride with me" section.  Not my genre but accomplished none the less.  Highly energetic and professional.  Well done.

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