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Lily In The Rain
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Bostonfan2
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Re: Lily In The Rain
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Reply #15 on:
June 05, 2022, 04:12:16 AM »
Just Fantastic John! Perfect tempo that swings just right. The groove grabs you
in , but its your vocal that stands out to me the most on this! Great job on pitch
and delivery, really enjoy this song!
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Neil C
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Re: Lily In The Rain
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Reply #16 on:
June 07, 2022, 09:40:18 AM »
@pompeyjazz
John, great nostalgic track. Great title and I’ve met too, although it wasn’t raining when we did walking the dog..
Double Fantasy-esque. The verses are really spot on and your vocals distinctive, heartfelt and just the right touch of Lennon.
Great work
:-)
Neil
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pompeyjazz
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Re: Lily In The Rain
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Reply #17 on:
June 07, 2022, 03:47:30 PM »
I just wanted to say a very big thank you for all of your reviews and listens on this latest song. As always they are very much appreciated
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Skub
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Re: Lily In The Rain
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June 07, 2022, 10:22:03 PM »
Yo pomps.
What a lovely old 60s feel to this one,but with a sound they could only dream about back then. Mighty.
With Michael coming on to a sheep and you writing love songs for your pooch,I'm beginning to wonder what's coming next. Durty Broots the lot of ye.
Great work as ever John.
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Re: Lily In The Rain
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Reply #19 on:
June 07, 2022, 10:53:29 PM »
Lovely sound and feel to this.
You have so many strings to your bow…and have the ability to either tear the place apart or lovingly put it all back together again.
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Re: Lily In The Rain
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Reply #20 on:
July 01, 2022, 10:15:23 AM »
A beautiful set of chords to begin this composition. Cool drumming and a delightful melody. Man's best friend immortalised in song. A chorus of such eloquent beauty. it's the equivalent of 'Me and Mrs Jones' but an ode to your faithful buddy!
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