Afternoon, I recently got engaged and decided to make a song to share our story of how we met albeit not the greatest of circumstances leading on to the proposal itself. I know the chorus isn't exactly original but ever since we've been together we have a long running roses are red violets are blue thing going and so when I proposed the words in the chorus are the words I read to her before popping the question. Anyway here it is, any thoughts good or bad always greatly appreciated :OP
https://soundcloud.com/user-586564289/stevie-untitled-25-apr-2022?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharingLeap of Faith Lyrics
V1
How we met, it was far from conventional
On both parts it wasn’t intentional
I just seen ya pretty face on my screen
While I was playing a game so I challenged you
Not even knowing what I would say
I mean I didn’t even know if you were down to chat
Until you hit me back with a “what kind of line was that”?
From that moment on we would message every day
Really getting to know each other, I started to feel a way
I’ve never felt before which was madness really
Hadn’t even met you but somehow I was nearly
In love.
I guess the relationships we were in just weren’t enough
So we continued to speak, chats getting deeper
I’d lay awake thinkin of you, I couldn’t sleep
but I knew you were in the same shoes
the longer this went on the more our feelings grew
I used to pull up in a secret road before I’d get home
Just so we could have a few moments alone
Yet we still hadn’t met so how could I of known
That it’s you, that I’d wanna say this to
Chorus
Roses are red
Violets are blue
All my life
I’ve wanted someone like you
But before we fall down to the ground
Let me tell you what I’ve found
You’re beautiful
You’re caring
You’re one in a million
You’re daring
You’re just perfect as can be
If I could I think I would get down on one knee
V2
By this point we’d video called now
so I knew you weren’t a catfish
honestly the relief had got me doing back flips
even prettier than I imagined and you just loved my accent
still we were yet to meet in person
the longer this went on the more frustrated we’d get
falling out over text if you had plans with ya ex
I wanted us to make moves, needing to know what was next
So I bluffed you and said I’ve left my girl
Cause there ain’t enough room for 2 in my world
I hated that I lied to you but I needed you to see
That you could do it too and we could both be free
But before you would agree we had to meet
I got my job to put me up in a hotel just 2 hours from you
You jumped on a train making sure no one knew
Finally we made it happen
I still remember you were wearing leggings and a white T
Before you jumped in my car and kissed me
Man it felt crazy, been waiting months for that moment
You can probably guess what happened next
so I won’t go into it, but we didn’t have long
before I drove you home and dropped you down a side road
we shared the sweetest kiss before we said goodnight
then we separated off back to our everyday lives
right then, I knew, that one day I’d say to you
Chorus
V3
Meeting up with you
Just solidified everything I thought I knew
So we made a move
I broke up with my girl, you left your man
I had a word with my boss just to see if can
Get an transfer up north to be closer to you
Give us a real chance to make our dreams come true
And so it happened
Now we’re 4 years down the line
But it hasn’t been easy, you lost your nanna and then your nain
Plus there was a time when my addiction got out of hand
But you didn’t run away you stayed and try to understand
And I can never thank you enough
All I can do is just shower you with love
My best friend, I promise to be honest til the end
Let’s fast forward to present
To each other we still mean everything
And for last few months I’ve been saving for a ring
I acquired some help from QTL
Cos diamonds are more affordable from zales
So shout out to you for that, I’ll never forget it girl
We had plans to bungee a hundred feet from a tree
I thought if I can take a leap of faith with you
Maybe you’ll take a leap of faith with me
So I pulled out a note and got down on one knee
And it reads
Chorus/Outro
Roses are red
Violets are blue
All my life
I’ve wanted someone like you
But before we fall down to the ground
Let me tell you what I’ve found
You’re beautiful
You’re caring
You’re one in a million
You’re daring
You’re just perfect as can be
so it would be an honor if you'd agree
to marry me - she said yes by the way!