Rhyming "world" and "hurts". I like it. Supports the unstable theme really well. I like the bass line. Mine are always so boring. This is much more interesting. I would like to see the lyrics in the post so I can follow along and look back while I'm thinking about it. I hear some nice touches in there.
I've seen you around the forum but I haven't been very active the past couple years, so I wanted to be sure to comment on this one.
Vicki