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Nice To Meet You

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StevieJ

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« on: January 13, 2022, 11:09:46 AM »
Hi there, I made this song as 1+1 just about meeting a girl on a night and things moving fast and you're finding it hard to slow down and I quite like it how it is but was looking for some feedback really to see if you think it should be developed more by adding more instruments etc. Also I'm not entirely happy with the end of verse 2 but maybe I'm overthinking it anyway would be great to know your thoughts good bad ugly etc. thanks in advance.

https://soundcloud.com/user-586564289/stevie-nice-to-meet-you-m4a?si=807e001ad52049838eefaf2af8d94c42&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

Nice To Meet You - Lyrics

Lyrics

verse 1
been out for a couple then a spotted you
sippin on gin from across the room
thought I'd leave it a minute cos my hearts not in it
but then I saw you move
the opposite of reluctantly
she got up from her seat heading my way
butterflies in stomach that can't fly away
can't shy away now so it's Hi I say
"do you come here often?"
can't believe I just said that, it's dead chat
not even started and i'm on a set back
hoping she'd just just forget that
can't let it bother me make no apology
but it's hard when I'm punchin like apollo creed
wishin the ground would open up and swallow me
then she whispered in my ear, come and follow me

 CH
nice to meet you - I hope it's
not too good to be true - cos 1
like the way you move - and I
don't need an excuse to buy you a drink

 Verse 2
couple hours pass and I'm re-fillin her glass
can't say it out loud but I'm feelin her ass
then she kissed me on the cheek
moving closer to my neck
praying she don't see that I'm erect
yes I want sex but it's not something I expect
if my mumma tought me anything it was
to treat the women you like with a little respect
so I need to reign it in it's gettin out of hand
but understand I'm just a man
she got me feelin like I'm peter pan
so I release her hand and say...
don't get me wrong you could ride me like seesaw
but I think we could be more so before
i'm in too deep and sink
let me buy you a drink

 CH
nice to meet you - I hope it's
not too good to be true - cos 1
like the way you move - and I
don't need an excuse to buy you a drink

 Verse 3
so if it's ok with you, ya number would be great
let me take you on a date
hows next tuesday if i pick you up at 8
she said you better not be late
I'm not looking for another mate
i said trust me I'll be there
see there ain't too many I seen like you
if I'm being honest you got the features of a goddess
the only thing odd is you taking a shine to me
now I'm just tryin make ya mine ya see
if i was to draw my type down on paper
it would look like you then she took me through
to a back room, lips stuck together like the floor and a vacuum
merci beaucoup she said "that's cute"
I said let's have one more for the road
then I gotta dash like morse code
but it's been a pleasure so

 CH
nice to meet you - I hope it's
not too good to be true - cos 1
like the way you move - and I
don't need an excuse to buy you a drink

macker71165

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« Reply #1 on: February 26, 2022, 12:08:02 PM »
 awsome

Wicked Deeds

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« Reply #2 on: March 05, 2022, 06:02:39 PM »
Love your guitar style!

Paul