@Maya Lars
This is an absolute gem; a work of art. Who knows where your talent will take you. Perhaps you will fly and become a huge recording star. If not, take great satisfaction in your achievements as an amazing songwriter. This is melancholic, and sinister. Above all it demonstrates your ability as a melody writer. It communicates great depth of thought and highlights the skill of a great writer at work, Whatever your secrete, take great care to always write with the nitegrity that you grace this forum with
Paul