Hi all..
Catching up on the forum tonight and I'll get to more over the coming days, some great stuff floating about..
A new one from yours truly and the wonderfully talented
@Jambrains .. a love song with a bit of a dark undertone (surprise surprise!
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All and any words of feedback wisdom will be more than welcome as we get some distance from it - as usual it's come together quickly from demo to this... and we're reeling a little as we've discovered this is the 30th song we've done together... Not entirely sure how that came about cos it certainly doesn't feel like we've been at this long enough for this to happen.. Time flies when you're having fun, I guess! And this one no less fun than any of the previous 29...
Thanks in advance for giving it a listen! Please share your crits and comments as we appreciate your ears and your expertise...
I don’t want you to go
I want you to stay
But I can’t let you know
That I’m so afraid
I know that you think
It’s a casual affair
And that love has no place
In the game that we play
You’re the reason I breathe
You’re the push and the pull in my days
And I know that I shouldn’t need
You to lead the way
But I need you, I need you to be there
So I can breathe
I fear if I show
That my love hasn’t waned
But instead it has grown
That I’ll scare you away
You’re the reason I breathe
You’re the push and the pull in my days
And I know that I shouldn’t need
You to lead the way
But I need you, I need you to be there
So I can breathe
A chance I take
A choice I made
To feel but hide the fear inside
To go so far
And then retreat
To show the the want, conceal the need
You’re the reason I breathe
You’re the push and the pull in my days
And I know that I shouldn’t need
You to lead the way
But I need you, I need you to be there
Do you need me to need you to be there?
So I can breathe