Hi, new to this forum here. English is not my first language and I’m trying to figure out if a short sentence of mine is ‘poetic’ or simply ‘wrong grammar’. Hope a native speaker can help me with this. The phrase (also the song title) is:
“Nightly ponders”
As in “worrying too much about everything during the night”
In the sentence, ponders is used as a noun (verb = to ponder), but according to dictionaries online the word doesn’t exist as a noun. Perhaps “Nightly ponderings” should be better, but it doesn’t go with the rhythm of the song.
What do you think? Is it just wrong grammar, poetical or colloquial language (which is also fine)?
Alternatives that fit the rhythm are:
"At night I ponder" (sounds a bit too dramatic)
"Nightly wonders" (not dramatic enough :-D