"One Day, Two Hearts"

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irwin

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« Reply #15 on: November 23, 2021, 01:20:18 PM »
some distortion is obvious that being said I still could have felt  mood of which you'd wanted this song to take it's listeners. It is a  romantic song, harmonics, wonderful to my ears. the arrangement top.

I think might work for weddings.

Glad I had the chance to hear your song Tom



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« Reply #16 on: November 28, 2021, 09:01:39 PM »
What a gorgeous folky number @IronKnee .. Most of all, I love the words and you've done them great service with that lovely melody - the vox enhanced by lovely BVs are a treat for the ears...

A very touching song.. just beautiful!

K

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« Reply #17 on: December 04, 2021, 08:56:35 PM »
Hey T|om

Lovely song - great pickin and singing too!
I'm not a big fan of doubled vocals and I too hear some distortion in the right channel, but apart from that I really enjoyed this. CSNY came to mind in the chorus. :D

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Paul

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« Reply #18 on: December 04, 2021, 08:57:59 PM »
some distortion is obvious that being said I still could have felt  mood of which you'd wanted this song to take it's listeners. It is a  romantic song, harmonics, wonderful to my ears. the arrangement top.

I think might work for weddings.

Glad I had the chance to hear your song Tom

Thanks Irwin!!

What a gorgeous folky number @IronKnee .. Most of all, I love the words and you've done them great service with that lovely melody - the vox enhanced by lovely BVs are a treat for the ears...

A very touching song.. just beautiful!

K

Thanks MonnoDB...........you are very kind!
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« Reply #19 on: December 05, 2021, 09:36:21 AM »
Love the Guitar work... Very sweet...  :)

Lyrics and Melody really cool...  8)

Inspiring...  :)

Great tune @IronKnee  :)
Just telling a few little stories...

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« Reply #20 on: December 05, 2021, 11:47:53 AM »
Hello Tom,

Great simplicity here.  For me the highlight is the meticulous acoustic playing.  I always admire that you take time to add backing vocals which further enhance your music.  I can almost hear strings, though I’m not sure if they are there or if there is just a suggestion.  I think that your songs would fly with a clearer recording including one or two production additions. 

Thank you for sharing your work.

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« Reply #21 on: December 05, 2021, 03:40:37 PM »
Beautifully crafted @IronKnee This could have come straight out of the 60s. Loved the close vocal harmonies and lovely acoustic backing