[rightly]

I look terrible here, again
but i think the performance is quite smooth
I've become incredibly slow with finishing new material
So this is an old favourite of mine

Feedback would be welcome
I'm always at least hoping to progress
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link:

over the garden wall


deconstruction of smaller parts
we're breaking it down once more
with shorter skirts and faster cars
we're filing for divorce
out through the window
to fly or to fall
will we land on our feet
over the garden wall

moral compass is all askew
it's hard to tell wrong from right
pushing forward we get confused
now don't you cheat on my wife
shake off your slumber
abandon the dream
willfully wander to
a place I've never been

the time has come to do or die,
to give the devil his due
your eyes have died two thousand times
as each one has lived a thousand lives
as each one, each one
each one has lived a thousand lives

I'm not complaining
it's par for the course that's all
there is plenty to see
over the garden wall

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Rightly

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[CaliaMoko]

Well! I think there is maybe a genre named "Rightly". If not, we need one. And an important part of the performance is the visual. All your posts should be videos. I don't know how to explain it, but I enjoy your performances on a different level when I can watch how you put yourself *into* it. It's great.

That's all the feedback I have--not too helpful, but that's what it is.

Vicki