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The Numbers (contains strong language & themes)

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LilPeeper

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« on: July 24, 2021, 06:32:29 PM »
My attempt at HipHop/rap  ;D

Chorus:
I'm undiscovered, send for Christopher Columbus!
He must be lost, somebody get that dude a compass
I threw a party for two, but didn't have the numbers
The numbers

My ego's smashed to bits
Like Blighty in the blitz
Hitler had a ball until those Nazis hit the skids
Winter come on through!
Toes be turning blue
Stalin did to them what Russian legends always do
Hit 'em where it hurt
Froze 'em in the dirt
Then painted the town red in a brand new “I Won The War” t-shirt
So different to today
How spoilt are these kids?
FaceTiming and TikToking as if that's all that there is
Let's talk mental health
Only gone one way, that's South
I guess we need to pay a shrink to come and stub it out
Can they sort me out too?
Got some shit to delve into
Troubled past, boring life, and a dick that never grew

Chorus:
I'm undiscovered, send for Christopher Columbus!
He must be lost, somebody get that dude a compass
I threw a party for two, but didn't have the numbers
The numbers

I'm a coiled spring
I'm a phone about to ring
I'm Whitney at her peak about to open her lips and sing
Untapped potential
And experimental
But if lockdown comes back I don't doubt I'm labelled non-essential
Queer like Freddie M
Not Freddie with a K
One has claws for hands, the other took it up the A
Such a weaker verse
Couldn't match the first
Yet another sequel, Marvel's bubble's bout to burst

Chorus:
I'm undiscovered, send for Christopher Columbus!
He must be lost, somebody get that dude a compass
I threw a party for two, but didn't have the numbers
The numbers

Chorus 2:
I'm lacking faith so like to give myself a roasting
How many people live their lives forever coasting?
I hope you found my words a tiny bit engrossing
Engrossing
« Last Edit: July 25, 2021, 11:49:42 AM by LilPeeper »

Max66

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« Reply #1 on: July 26, 2021, 11:51:37 PM »
My attempt at HipHop/rap  ;D

Chorus:
I'm undiscovered, send for Christopher Columbus!
He must be lost, somebody get that dude a compass
I threw a party for two, but didn't have the numbers
The numbers

My ego's smashed to bits
Like Blighty in the blitz
Hitler had a ball until those Nazis hit the skids
Winter come on through!
Toes be turning blue
Stalin did to them what Russian legends always do
Hit 'em where it hurt
Froze 'em in the dirt
Then painted the town red in a brand new “I Won The War” t-shirt
So different to today
How spoilt are these kids?
FaceTiming and TikToking as if that's all that there is
Let's talk mental health
Only gone one way, that's South
I guess we need to pay a shrink to come and stub it out
Can they sort me out too?
Got some shit to delve into
Troubled past, boring life, and a dick that never grew

Chorus:
I'm undiscovered, send for Christopher Columbus!
He must be lost, somebody get that dude a compass
I threw a party for two, but didn't have the numbers
The numbers

I'm a coiled spring
I'm a phone about to ring
I'm Whitney at her peak about to open her lips and sing
Untapped potential
And experimental
But if lockdown comes back I don't doubt I'm labelled non-essential
Queer like Freddie M
Not Freddie with a K
One has claws for hands, the other took it up the A
Such a weaker verse
Couldn't match the first
Yet another sequel, Marvel's bubble's bout to burst

Chorus:
I'm undiscovered, send for Christopher Columbus!
He must be lost, somebody get that dude a compass
I threw a party for two, but didn't have the numbers
The numbers

Chorus 2:
I'm lacking faith so like to give myself a roasting
How many people live their lives forever coasting?
I hope you found my words a tiny bit engrossing
Engrossing

First of all your attempt is really good but hey ''send''

I'm undiscovered, sent for Christopher Columbus!
He must be lost, somebody get that dude a compass
I threw a party for two, but didn't have the numbers
Those damn phone numbers