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Maya Clars
Solo Gig
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Re: Road 22
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Reply #15 on:
July 27, 2021, 10:43:07 AM »
@digger72
Hello!
Ahh, thank you so so much!
) I'm happy you like the sound of the vocal I got, I need to know
Thank you again!
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LostBoy
Platinum Album
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Re: Road 22
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Reply #16 on:
July 27, 2021, 07:50:22 PM »
Hi Maya, Congratulations on another cool song. This one is my fave I’ve heard of yours. The chorus is so catchy. Your production is fantastic! How lucky we are on this forum to have someone young and talented like you who has an actual chance to achieve her dreams! I’m sure I wouldn’t be out of line to say that we are all cheering you on! Go on girl!!!🤩🎶🎶👊🏻🎶🎶🥳
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moraamarolaloba
Stadium Tour
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Re: Road 22
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July 28, 2021, 07:44:58 PM »
Hola
It is a great song, modern, dynamic, fresh, very well produced and with a very entertaining video.@maya sagi
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rightly
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Re: Road 22
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July 29, 2021, 05:33:01 PM »
yes I really like this track too!
you're very talented
I wonder if you you did it all yourself
the dancing is very cool
lol. I'm usually very picky with lyrics
but these lyrics are just splendid.
I wish you all the success you deserve
an if you get discovered by the industry I hope you're not compromised but enriched.
Good quality pop!! love it!!.
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Neil C
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Re: Road 22
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Reply #19 on:
August 15, 2021, 11:56:33 AM »
@Maya Clars
Cool, modern sounding pop tune, sorry didn't watch the video as they distract me from the music.
Catchy, lots to like here.
Thoughts: I would've the vocals up a little bit. And I wasn't sure the middle section was needed, it took the energy away for me.
I could easily hear this at a festival.
Good luck with it
:-)
neil
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