I like this, you are really good with words but some of your words at start of lines just didn't flow easy for me could be different in song but hope you don't mine
I don't wanna tie you down
Your spirit should soar free
You're better than this dead end town
Too good too good for me
I don't wanna make you mad
You're destined for more
Break free from your Stalingrad
Go walk go walk out that door
My bird's heart is broken
Went back on my word
I once swore “forever”
Forever got deferred
I could be wrong and I probably am but I think it sings better, really good lyrics