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Stalingrad

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LilPeeper

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« on: July 17, 2021, 02:14:00 PM »
My bird's wings are broken
So she never learned to fly
Always at the window
But too afraid to try

Chorus:
No, I don't wanna tie you down
Your spirit should soar free
You're better than this dead end town
And too good for me
No, I don't wanna make you mad
But you're destined for more
Break free from this Stalingrad
Go walk out that door

My bird's heart is broken
Went back on my word
I once swore “forever”
But forever's got deferred

Chorus:
No, I don't wanna tie you down
Your spirit should soar free
You're better than this dead end town
And too good for me
No, I don't wanna make you mad
But you're destined for more
Break free from this Stalingrad
Go walk out that door

Staying would only cause you pain
A bullet aiming for your brain
It's too cold to stand out in the rain

My love for you's like a selfish lover
Soon as I come, straight onto another
Sorry we're not destined for each other

Chorus:
No, I don't wanna tie you down
Your spirit should soar free
You're better than this dead end town
And too good for me
No, I don't wanna make you mad
But you're destined for more
Break free from this Stalingrad
Go walk out that door

Max66

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« Reply #1 on: July 17, 2021, 11:25:39 PM »
I like this, you are really good with words but some of your words at start of lines just didn't flow easy for me could be different in song but hope you don't mine

I don't wanna tie you down
Your spirit should soar free
You're better than this dead end town
Too good too good for me
I don't wanna make you mad
You're destined for more
Break free from your Stalingrad
Go walk go walk out that door

My bird's heart is broken
Went back on my word
I once swore “forever”
Forever got deferred

I could be wrong and I probably am but I think it sings better, really good lyrics  8)

LilPeeper

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« Reply #2 on: July 24, 2021, 06:08:20 PM »
Thanks Max66 and I agree it flows better with your proposed changes  :)