Visions of Love

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wkamen

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« on: July 09, 2021, 05:10:24 PM »
Killin’ time, sippin’ a beer
At a boardwalk bar by the sea
The jukebox playin’ visions of love
My mind drifts away to a girl on a beach
Swayin' to the sound of the waves
A glow on her face as bright as the sun
The wind in her hair, pink ribbons in hands

I couldn’t help but stare
I caught your glance, you smiled and said hi
You did your best to put a guy at ease
With arms stretched wide, letting me in
The touch of your hand calms the storm within
I see it in your eyes and feel it from your heart
Love was all around me

You make it so easy the way you love me
Unconditional, Unconditionally
You love me unconditionally

We set sail together out upon the waters
Adrift in the shallows of a turning tide
Thunderous clouds burst into the stormy sky
Awakening the monsters of the deep sea
Feeding my mind with evil thoughts
Take away this curse of shameful infidelities
Take me away from this life

You let loose the sails from your heart
So your inner glow could light the way
Into the wonders of the mystic
The echoing sounds of the waves
Flow over, into, and through me
Shedding my sins into the depths of the sea
Suddenly, life has new meaning
A rainbow appears on the horizon
           And that girl

My vision of the angel of love
Gone, but will always live within my soul
You made it so easy the way you loved me
Unconditional, Unconditionally
You loved me unconditionally

« Last Edit: August 30, 2021, 02:38:20 PM by wkamen »

Max66

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« Reply #1 on: July 10, 2021, 01:36:36 AM »
Hi wkamen, first of I'm seriously no good at reviews and tbh I was puzzled as to why four verses before the chorus so I listen to your other post on lyrics ''My Isolation'' (nice song) so I'm thinking your lyrics here is better to be heard as song than to be read as lyric but, your first verse was annoying me which for me didn't help me flow into your other verses so sorry I lost interest but anyway, nice to meet you  8)

All alone in the darkness
Looking back on the memories
Of that summer place
Where the land meets the sea
Somewhere , somewhere only we knew