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Max66

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A Cottage In The Valley Below

« on: July 06, 2021, 11:09:43 PM »

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Re: A Cottage In The Valley Below

« Reply #1 on: July 07, 2021, 07:16:20 PM »
I struggled with some of these lines in terms of being able to sing them without the flow getting messed up. There's a story there, but there's quite a few errors/typos and that didn't help the flow eg. "There was a old man" should be "There was an old man" - it might be done on purpose, but I'm not sure...
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Re: A Cottage In The Valley Below

« Reply #2 on: July 07, 2021, 11:17:59 PM »
Quote from: LilPeeper on July 07, 2021, 07:16:20 PM
I struggled with some of these lines in terms of being able to sing them without the flow getting messed up. There's a story there, but there's quite a few errors/typos and that didn't help the flow eg. "There was a old man" should be "There was an old man" - it might be done on purpose, but I'm not sure...

Thanks Lil, this was written in a flow of a poetical style ''I have change the a to an'' thank you
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