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No signal (Shaman’s song)

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JustSoStories

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« on: July 06, 2021, 12:03:40 AM »
Hey there,
I thought I'd share these lyrics that I wrote for a song I'm working on.
Your thoughts and perspectives are welcome!


No signal (Shaman’s song)

Hey sit back relax
you’re home from your distress
I will protect, I will project
Entertaining flickering lights

I saw your people in their eyes
but then no signal

We’re going through a downward spiral
where nothing ever happens
I hear these words defying hell
as we walk down around this stairway
 
We're getting further from each other 
There is no more tension

No please, Think again
I’ve got exciting plans
I will protect, I  will project
your every single desire

I saw your people with their head down
but then no signal

We're in a mutual suggestion that has slowly become so real
Just like the way the old shaman extracts the evil with his bare hands

We're getting further from each other 
There is no more tension
No more tension
 
Please tell me now who really needs more of this information
Please tell me now who really needs more attention
Please tell me now who actually is in real need
Please tell me
 

Max66

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« Reply #1 on: July 17, 2021, 11:42:04 PM »
On first thoughts this flows like a preacher raper song ''I saw your people in their eyes'' what is that the light are on but no one home, but then that is something maybe a preacher would say, I don't know, what type of music is in your head for this.

LilPeeper

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« Reply #2 on: July 24, 2021, 06:06:45 PM »
Sorry but I can't really make much sense of this. I personally like songs with some kind of rhyming scheme and this doesn't have that. It just feels like lots of random lines thrown together at the moment for me.