My Passion

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SlavaB

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« on: June 17, 2021, 03:34:47 PM »
Hi Folks,

I'm changing towards punk now  ;D Please drop your opinions on this piece of work, that will help to determinate if I'm moving into right direction in terms of sound.

Link : https://soundcloud.com/slavab/slava-b-my-passion/s-tButo2UEUdj

Thank you.

Lyrics :

Hoy hoy hoy. life begin

hoy hoy hoy,

I have met my passion
Passion over music
Music push my limits
And Limits push my living

Verse 1

Where have i just come
Who listens music here
I can hear beat in there
Electro sound in the air

Rock music is my love
Turn a bit volume up
Kick should of punch my chest
Sound engineering here

Verse 2

Ive got my new guitar
Sounds like it something new
Just about to come out
Please listen to it right now


Chorus

Please please please
All raise your hands
i want to see your hands
Where ?
Where sound come from
My feets want move along
Uh uh uh uh
Why so sweet, it sounds like mega beat
You,
You listen it, remember my beat

I close my eyes, to have a feel
To have a feel of you
Prepare your head, prepare your neck
Mosh pit


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« Reply #1 on: June 17, 2021, 09:55:43 PM »
Hola @SlavaB

OMG, I have been intimidated !!!hahaha  So much possession!
I like your song, it is different having a Russian punk color, a Bolshevik ballet in full force !!!! Passsioooonnn
hoy hoy hoy
I did not know that to live we had to die so many times
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« Reply #2 on: June 18, 2021, 02:12:45 PM »
well this is different
I read through the lyrics 1st
they're strange and i like them.

I like the sound
it's bit confusing.
the verses are delivered in a Rammstein fashion..

I'd get away from that m'thinks.
I dunno you could go all opera on it, with male n' female voices.
it all sounds very creative, I see a lot of potential.
I'm just not a fan of the Rammstein sound.
It's either this or that, then again it might be the other. 

I can promise you a future of slow decline.

Don't eat the yellow snow

And there you have it. 

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« Reply #3 on: June 18, 2021, 02:35:27 PM »
@SlavaB - Great to hear from you again Mr B.

Original indeed, DeathRap, Mr Lordi of the Streets...meets OMD wearing cossak outfits , fantastic mashup.

Wouldn't dare to begin to offer any advice, just go with what you reckon Slava, hoy, hoy




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« Reply #4 on: June 18, 2021, 02:51:21 PM »
Hola @SlavaB

OMG, I have been intimidated !!!hahaha  So much possession!
I like your song, it is different having a Russian punk color, a Bolshevik ballet in full force !!!! Passsioooonnn
hoy hoy hoy

Hi,

Im sorry to feel you intimidated lol 😁 Thank you for your time and feedback, that is the most distinctive feedback i ever heard... ha ha. Thank you darling.

well this is different
I read through the lyrics 1st
they're strange and i like them.

I like the sound
it's bit confusing.
the verses are delivered in a Rammstein fashion..

I'd get away from that m'thinks.
I dunno you could go all opera on it, with male n' female voices.
it all sounds very creative, I see a lot of potential.
I'm just not a fan of the Rammstein sound.

Hi rightly,
Thanm you for your feedback, for the last year im trying to move away from Rammstein thematic, but it seems to be something pulling me back to it. I appreciate you mention this as this is exactly what im trying to move from as locally majority calling me a local one man Rammstein, and for original artist its getting to the point where the actual artists individuality getting lost.

thank you.

@SlavaB - Great to hear from you again Mr B.

Original indeed, DeathRap, Mr Lordi of the Streets...meets OMD wearing cossak outfits , fantastic mashup.

Wouldn't dare to begin to offer any advice, just go with what you reckon Slava, hoy, hoy





Hello sir,

Ha ha you described a great mixture of bands within a two minutes song, loved it. Thank you for listening and feeding back on this one. Hope you well.

Best Regards,
Slava B.

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« Reply #5 on: June 18, 2021, 02:55:04 PM »
well this is different
I read through the lyrics 1st
they're strange and i like them.

I like the sound
it's bit confusing.
the verses are delivered in a Rammstein fashion..

I'd get away from that m'thinks.
I dunno you could go all opera on it, with male n' female voices.
it all sounds very creative, I see a lot of potential.
I'm just not a fan of the Rammstein sound.

I take my lyrics feeling dodgy if to read them lol, but i really struggle to find the right theme to fit the song, so went for sorts of a live version to engage with a crowd when performing live, first gig planned in for 7th August in Cambridge so will see there how it goes 😁

cowparsleyman

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« Reply #6 on: June 18, 2021, 05:31:07 PM »
@SlavaB - You maybe heading down a road that may prove very fruitful, by that I mean that There are 1000’s of rammsteiners but there is only 1 slavaB. It may be a dead end but worth a try…

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« Reply #7 on: June 18, 2021, 08:06:35 PM »
Positives: The music. The negatives: The lyrics don't do anything for me and the vocals aren't to my liking. Personal taste, but I'm glad others enjoyed it and I'm sure it was fun to create.

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« Reply #8 on: June 18, 2021, 09:24:58 PM »
@SlavaB - You maybe heading down a road that may prove very fruitful, by that I mean that There are 1000’s of rammsteiners but there is only 1 slavaB. It may be a dead end but worth a try…

I thought about, definetly a risk there. But on another hand when for instance i listen similar to Rammstein bands i feel its like a cheap parody 😁 hence people may think the same of me, difficult
 to outbeat legends in their sphere 😁.

Positives: The music. The negatives: The lyrics don't do anything for me and the vocals aren't to my liking. Personal taste, but I'm glad others enjoyed it and I'm sure it was fun to create.

Hi LilPeeper,

Thank you for your time listening and providing feedback.

Best Regards,
Slava B.

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« Reply #9 on: June 18, 2021, 10:07:17 PM »
@SlavaB - Rammstein wouldn’t be where they got to without taking risks, follow your instincts and see how you are received at the next bunch of gigs, don’t be put off by your fans who are expecting you to be a rammstein clone. It’s always hard to change your genre…all the best with it


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« Reply #10 on: June 19, 2021, 09:13:43 AM »
@SlavaB  you’ve made a powerful sound here! It’s great production to get such a big sound yet it’s still controlled, the drums have a real punch… hats off to you for writing in a second language, it gives the lyrics a distinctive shape that I actually quite enjoyed, also I love the way you roll your ‘r’s - again very distinctive. I’m put in mind a bit more of ‘die totenhosen’ rather than rammstein, nice one! - keep going 👍
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« Reply #11 on: June 19, 2021, 11:38:57 PM »
Hey Slava,
Well you already know I'm a big fan of your stuff.  It always make me grin from ear to ear.  This one too.
Especially the section beginning "please please please all raise your hands" - it finds additional velocity from there.
I dig your vocal delivery.  I don't know how much you are playing a 'character' and how much this is just you... but either way, I love this kind of Slavic / rock mash-up.  I hope to hear from more from you on your Punk adventure.
By the way, lyrically, yeah it is a bit weird & unclear in the phrasing, but that's part of the charm for me... I can tell it is about passion for music... and I always think "music about celebrating music" tends to work really well.  Life affirming track.  Do some more!
It's all too beautiful.