I wrote these lines years ago. I would like to know if it isn't to cheesy. If to much is an issue on a love song that is.
Are the lines well written? My English isn't that good, I think.
hee girl, let me slide away in your arms
I don't ever wanna be alone
You can set my mind at ease
Hee girl, you must be coming down from heaven
only you can twist and turn me around
and slowly take my heart away
do you wanna know what is this feeling inside us?
I'd never do something to hurt our love
(I) coudn't even find a reason
And all this time we'd love
hee girl,let me get to know your language
and please borrow me your suede lips
I will carry them on mine
hee girl, your eyes can put a spell on me
your gentle touch is making me dizzy
you keep me coming back for more
do you wanna know what is this feeling inside us?
I'd never do something to hurt our love
(I) coudn't even find a reason
do you wanna know what is this feeling inside us?
I'd never do something to hurt our love
(I) couldn't even find a reason
And all this time we'd love
and something's becoming clear to me
We are living the dream
we'll announce this never-ending love for all the world to see
and all this time we'd love
© 2020 Veance
