That epic opening really sells the track to me at the start. Piano and acoustics sound really strong.
I feel your vocal may have a little too much reverb on it, would love to hear it a little closer it and get the breathy sound of it in the mic. The voice just sounds a little apart from the track to my ears. You sing it really well tho!
Reminds me of Prefab Sprout at times, and I adore the work of Paddy McAloon.
It's a superb song, hard to state my admiration of such quality work in words here.
Top drawer stuff.