[Charlotte]

https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/jXBhrnn5Xt2UhACb9

I’m interested in collaborative writing so if anyone has any interest in working on this with me I’d be greatly interested maybe I could help with one of yours in return

Falling down I’m falling down
Falling down I’m falling down
Falling down I’m falling down
Falling down I’m falling down

All of the things I never got to say watching you walk away
All of the things I never got to say watching you walk away
I think back to the time that we spent and I can’t get it out of my head
Falling down I’m falling down

I don’t like the way that you do that
The way you act like nothings going on
I don’t like the way that you do that
The way you handle this all
I don’t like the way that you do that
The way you act like nothings going on
I don’t like the way that you do that
The way you handle this all

Seems to me you’re fading away
So I guess that that’s ok
Seems to me you’re fading away
Whilst I’m falling down

Falling down I’m falling down
Falling down I’m falling down
Falling down I’m falling down
Falling down I’m falling down

All of the things I never got to say watching you walk away
All of the things I never got to say watching you walk away
I think back to the time that we spent and I
Can’t get it out of my head
I’m falling down I’m falling down
I’m falling down I’m falling down

I’m falling down I’m falling down
I’m falling down I’m falling down

It’s to this beat:

[5 guys named Lars]

Hi @Charlotte & welcome to the forum.
I`m rubbish at collaborations so no help really but I`ve listened to your song (& its very nice) & the obvious thing to me (I always state the bleeding obvious is to have the other person falling down at the end, when you`ve pushed them off a cliff or a large tower (a bit of violence never hurt anybody) .  You`ve fallen so far you`re taking them down. You could then amend the verses to create a little story "the time that we spent"to  "the lies that you said" etc etc. The verses can just tell the story. As long as you get redemption thats the main thing.
Good luck with it & look forward to hearing more,
Cheers,
Chris.

[Charlotte]

Thank you I'll give it a go!!!!

[Sebandme]

I really like the melodic vibes..... Its a great hook...... Some nice lyrics in there also...... Looking forward to the finished version.