[LostBoy]

Well this is my fave of yours in a while guys! Very cool! No nits whatsoever, I just enjoyed every note. Catchy chorus...I love the effects on your voice Karen. Great job both of you.🎶👍🏻🎶😄

[adamfarr]

Such a good fusion of you both in this one. It's a really top quality piece with a huge sound. Lots of lyrical content, none of it tired.

My only comment would be that you could slightly improve the wrist position on that left jab...

[Paulski]

Hi @MonnoDB Karen and @Jambrains
What a cool rocker - shades of Alanis Moriset.
Love how the chorus lifts and the vocals are spot on.
And of course those rauchy Jambrains guitars are stellar.
Piano is pretty damn good too.
Good work!
Paul

[Wicked Deeds]

Hello @MonnoDB and @Jambrains,    Regardless of the very good musical production, it’s great to hear that the songwriting underpins everything here.  The lyrics are very well written.  This is melodic and has some great vocal motifs.  It’s a fine blend of piano and \rock guitar but once again I revert to the most important aspect which is the quality songwriting. 

Much to enjoy here .  Great team work :-)

Paul

[5 guys named Lars]

Another excellent song @MonnoDB & @Jambrains .  The verses must have been a mouthful Karen but when the chorus kicks in they contrast delightfully. Lots going on with top lyrics & melodies keeping it interesting till the end. Well done both of you.

[kevysc]

Great start and love the vocal in the verse. Well crafted lyrics.

Excellent production and a catchy chorus. Nice variation in the bridge, super piano playing. My only nit is that, in places, the drums sound ever so slightly off? ( Could just be me.)

Either way, loved it

Kevin

[MonnoDB]

Wow thanks guys for the great comments!!!

@kevysc thanks so much.. noted re drums... we'll have a look see..
@5 guys named Lars - you're not wrong about the mouthful.. thanks so much
@Wicked Deeds such great comments - thanks so much..
@Paulski - thanks a mill... And chuffed with the piano comment coming from you
@adamfarr - hey thanks.. I'll try to fix that weak wrist position !
@LostBoy - no nits? Wow.. chuffed..
@Maya Clars - thanks so much
@montydog - wow, what amazing comments - thank you so much..
@crystalsuzy - hey great to see you!!! Thanks soo much!!
@Jamie - I'm outrageously delighted with your comments.. Thank you!!

Delighted with the comments - thanks all so much for taking the time to listen and comment...

K