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A word from God

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IronKnee

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« Reply #15 on: January 23, 2021, 03:56:42 AM »
Nice production.....a bit dark, but nice. I can't relate much with the lyric. I see it completely different ;-)
With that said...........keep on writing, and have fun.
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« Reply #17 on: January 23, 2021, 06:42:59 PM »

@Wicked Deeds  cheers, I’d really like to work with a female singer- I don’t know any, but I guess this place is where to find one right? I just need to pluck up the courage!😁

it's a bit like dating!  ;D ;D ;D


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« Reply #18 on: January 23, 2021, 08:50:20 PM »
Loved this @man made material Clever subject matter and getting the DM influence as well. Love the choices of dark and dirty synths and you've left enough space to give the song great dynamics. Great stuff

man made material

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« Reply #19 on: January 24, 2021, 03:08:17 PM »
@MonnoDB  thanks for listening and the positive comments!
@IronKnee  thanks for giving it a go even if you have a different point of view - it’s what makes the world go round!... and with no sense of irony, I love your name!
@Melusine2  cheers! I love me some DM!
@Wicked Deeds  I’ll put my lucky underpants on😉😁
@pompeyjazz  cheers sir! Much appreciated 👍
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ChrisPrice

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« Reply #20 on: January 24, 2021, 06:04:27 PM »
It isn't typical of the kind of music I listen to but I really like this. The lyrics make perfect sense to me - I couldn't have put it better. All a matter of opinion of course. The arrangement is spot on. Well done, this is awesome. :)

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« Reply #21 on: January 24, 2021, 06:57:17 PM »
Theres a real depth to the idea that man created God in their image.. great job with the lyrics well done!

The mix sounds good, but my ears were craving for a bit more variety to be going on as the song progressed - that could be either further variations in the melodies, or perhaps additional 'high-up' instruments (man made in the sky  :)) that come in and sprinkle across the middle section and final verse?

Overall an interesting and thought provoking track.