I look see horizon

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« on: January 17, 2021, 02:29:35 PM »
Long distance
relationship during the Covid hysteria.

(the covid virus with the restrictions.
I don't know what exactly to make of it.
it's either massive Incompetence, on the part of most Governments
or there is something much more sinister underway. or both.
Either way it's hard to believe, isn't it?)

Anyway, here I'm pining for my lover.
Music is finished on the guitar at least.
A fairly fast write.

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I Look See Horizon




in the year of death
did I not live alone?
there I found your sweetness
now I want you to know
I look see horizon
as near as it can be
I just close my eyes and
it’s like you’re here with me
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I look see horizon
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when this war is over
before the next begins
if I get to hold you
it matters less who wins
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I look see horizon
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well, that would be my luck
to give a fuck then fall
for one who leaves me wanting
when I would have it all
‘goes around, comes around
y’know that’s what they say
furthermore if not now
I will get mine someday
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I look see horizon
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when this war is over
before the next begins
if i get to hold you
it matters not who wins
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I look see horizon
I look see horizon
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when this war is over
will I get to hold you?



Rightly
It's either this or that, then again it might be the other. 

I can promise you a future of slow decline.

Don't eat the yellow snow

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« Reply #1 on: January 19, 2021, 05:20:44 AM »
This is the best Lyric I've read from you.  It's totally able to stand alone without the music -- although I'm sure music will add to it a lot. 

I would give you a quick warning that the mods would like you to label your post as containing profanity.  There used to be some young kids here.  Don't know if there still are, but the rule probably hasn't changed.  They just want a notification in the post heading before it's opened and the profanity is encountered. 
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« Reply #2 on: January 19, 2021, 05:24:19 AM »
BTW.... if you want to remove your own duplicate post, just go to the bottom of your post and you have the options to "Quote"  "Modify"  or "Remove" the post.  Lower right corner of the post above the purple buttons.  "Remove" deletes the thread.
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« Reply #3 on: January 20, 2021, 01:28:27 PM »
This is the best Lyric I've read from you.  It's totally able to stand alone without the music -- although I'm sure music will add to it a lot. 

I would give you a quick warning that the mods would like you to label your post as containing profanity.  There used to be some young kids here.  Don't know if there still are, but the rule probably hasn't changed.  They just want a notification in the post heading before it's opened and the profanity is encountered. 

my bestest lyric?

lol
I think not
I find myself at a low ebb

well the guitar music is done
I might post it like that

but I eventually want to do a Cubase version too
It's either this or that, then again it might be the other. 

I can promise you a future of slow decline.

Don't eat the yellow snow

And there you have it. 

https://soundcloud.com/2rightly

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« Reply #4 on: January 22, 2021, 06:14:43 PM »
This is the best Lyric I've read from you.  It's totally able to stand alone without the music -- although I'm sure music will add to it a lot. 

I would give you a quick warning that the mods would like you to label your post as containing profanity.  There used to be some young kids here.  Don't know if there still are, but the rule probably hasn't changed.  They just want a notification in the post heading before it's opened and the profanity is encountered. 

my bestest lyric?

lol

I think not
I find myself at a low ebb

well the guitar music is done
I might post it like that

but I eventually want to do a Cubase version too

I shouldn't have said "best."  I should have said it was my favorite. 
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