High Tide....... Would love to hear any opinions good or bad

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« on: April 26, 2021, 08:10:15 PM »
Hi everyone,

Just looking for some encouragement...... Does this have potential just got a verse and a chorus at the moment. When I've listened to it back I really like it but I dont know if thats just because it's something new.

* there is a swear word in it*

*also I really apologise for the sniffing at the start I recorded it as I kinda wrote it so maybe skip first 10 seconds lol*

*I'm not a piano player and aware the timing is all over the place was just trying to catch the melody*
 


I saw you sitting down looking at your phone in the coffee house
I hope you didn't catch me when I was watching you look at the ground.
And Everytime I saw you I lost my shit completely I was dumbfounded.
My heart was heavy like a stone becoming  hard to carry around.

I'm falling in high tide.
Running on overdrive.
Don't know what these feelings are.
Just know that it's what we are.

Listen to Project 15 by Sebastian And Me on #SoundCloud
https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/TW5Qk



Thanks for taking the time to listen  :)