[sarahlawrence17]

Hi everyone! This is a song I made the other day - I tried out Elliott Smith-esque double tracked vocals for the first time, would love to hear some feedback

Link:

https://soundcloud.com/sarahlawrencemusic/everything-anything

Lyrics:

summer like a band-aid
losing it a slow game
as the days drip drip from a faucet
you could get drunk on the stink of it

i’m laughing in a graveyard
driving in a grey car
rotting in some old fast food place
the only one open on holidays

when i forget to speak
i can feel the places where you used to be
and how I wanted to tell you everything
what do I know about anything
what do I know about anything

you were growing a sunflower
in the window of your parents house
one day it was taller than i’ll ever be
that’s when i knew you would grow out of me 

we were sleeping in the foxgloves
pigeons or a white dove
i don’t believe in god, i was saying
but when i get scared, i start praying

i didn’t ask you then
left the question melting to ash in the wind
and how i wanted to tell you everything
what do i know about anything
what do i know about anything

[man made material]

What a beautiful song, and what a beautiful voice (voices!) amazing production, the treatment of your double track vocal withe occasional echo is sublime... this sounds so professional and you’re clearly super talented... enough gushing, just brilliant!👌👌👌

[rightly]

yeah
lovely song well Done!!

good production
unusual to my ear
but it really works!

intriguing lyrics 

[moraamarolaloba]

this song is a jewel, a crystal drop that shines somewhere where the sun chooses where to put its light.
I really liked it, pure poetry and also a beautiful voice and an elegant and sweet arrangement.

This line is wonderful among others..
"as the days drip drip from a fauce"

Nice to meet you.

Mora

[Andreas]

What. A. Voice! The lyrics are fantastic, and the harmonies really completes the song! Really like the indie/folk style you are going for, and the production is really good! Well done!

[Wicked Deeds]

@sarahlawrence17,

I'm always impressed when I hear someone who can sing so well. It's  one of thr greatest assets that a songwtiter can have. Coupled with the emotional delivery of the melody and introspective commentary your song reels the lustener in  to conclude, this is beautiful!

Paul

[Viscount Cramer & His Orchestra]

Lovely Sarah and sounds really good mix to me...harmonies are great.

I just had a sneak listen to the last song I remember you posting ('Wildflowers') and you've come on a lot on the production... the subtle piano touches and strings sounds fabulous.

Really nice listen and great to hear your singing again!

[Jamie]

@sarahlawrence17

Hi, brilliant song, brilliant lyrics, grilling singing. What else can I say, oh yes the production and arrangement was also........brilliant

Enjoyed it

Jamie

[Maya Clars]

A beautiful and melodic song. I love how you did a vocal harmony.
The melody creates a warm and relaxing vibe

Maya

[Veance]

I simply can't add anything to this. It's absolutely topshelf...fan.

[Veance]

Listened to it three times in a row and...now I know it's the voices. Yep, definitley the voices... they are mesmerizingly addictive.

[Sebandme]

@sarahlawrence17 this is absolutely amazing...... Captivating, memorising..... Just honestly beautiful love it..... Double tracked vocals worked a treat...... İ love the birds at the start and end... And the soft strings that popped in and out..... You should be majorly proud of that!!! Seriously talented lady.