Hi
@CaliaMoko Firstly I enjoyed the song very much 😍
What kind of production (what style, etc) would suit it
I think getting a little more rhythm in the guitar and vocal delivery would help...there is a saying then a recall method being deployed so a little pause and an emphasis on the reply would help...thinking beautiful south here...don’t marry her
2. What are the weakest lines
You like hiding your emotions; I let mine show
Would work better You like hiding your emotions; I like to let mine show
3. Weakest phrase(s) in the melody
I would put a little lilt in the reply to tie in with suggestion 1
So on v2 Now I prefer my toast with butter, you prefer it dry...take dry up or down a note to create more variance in the melody
4. Is there enough imagery
YES
5. Any specific suggestions you have for improvement in general
I would get a nice rhythm accompaniment and some strings to make it quite epic 😝😍
I hope my ramblings help...you write really neat and tidy and I suppose I would encourage you to be a bit looser...that’s not a criticism as such...
Feel free to ignore...I admire your work 🤩👍🏻