[missking1]

Hey Guys

Im a singer and Songwriter and new here so still tryna figure out how things work here , but gonna post some of my Demos and im always happy for fresh Ideas , advices and critics 😘💁‍♀️

(Not studio quality i recorded it at home with beats headphones and i cant mixing and mastering so just focus more on the lyrics and the idea of the whole Composing)

https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/Tt6KnS4RMkzB9cXD8


Holdin on after all hope is gone
Nothing left of you and me
Drowning love in jealousy
Holding on memorys
Of what we had and what we used to be

My love just starved in all your vain
I never saw a reason for this pain
You said u were a prisoner in my chains
Guess loving you was damn insane

Everytime i try to let you go
You keep me come back for more
My heart say yes but my mind say no
I just cant let you go

EverTime i found someone new
I keep running back to you

[Sebandme]

this is really good very very current sound! easily hear this on the radio, for someone who cat mix you've done a super job, the only thing I can say is.......what have you done to the voice........thats a big let down like massively, so much potential.

excellent demo - but take that effect off the voice and have someone sing it properly.

please don't take that harsh, just I hear talent here and would love to hear with a proper vocal.