[adamfarr]

Not sure why but I felt enraged about the whole story here - just about everything felt unnecessary or given the choice done in the dumbest way possible. No sympathy for the murderer but it all seemed avoidable really.

Very clever to use the choruses to continue the story. Nothing seems forced and the parallels with the Western story are great. The production that you did really made a new track from the original, although your voice and guitar would do that anyway.

Great challenge. Like most of the entries I did not see that coming.

[Neil C]

Paul,
Great storytelling, the first person really works, there's enough ambiguity around the love song to fir the imagination, whilst you always knew it went going end well :-)
And great the way you break it down on the 'always heading for a showdown'
And Steve's tasteful solo at the end....
:-)
neil