Lovely swooshing atmosphere here - Ian McNabb meets Crowded House, and I really get the slightly tipsy vibe.
I've noticed you don't really do choruses - maybe because you have so much to say it seems a waste to do repeats. Works really well here to just keep adding more details. The direct quotes from your mother are brilliant touches to really take us there.
Very listenable and produced a classic PaulAds anedote to boot. Fab stuff.