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HELP! I've got lyrics but apart from that I'm hopeless.

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« on: August 22, 2020, 10:50:32 PM »
I have created an album called "In Absentia". It conists of 6/7 songs based around a broken friendship. Some producers I met and record labels liked my ideas but thanks to COVID-19 the things didn't go as planned. Anyone who would like to give me a chance to create art? I attached a song called "Sour". It's the 2nd track and I hope you like it.

“SOUR”

V2:
I always wanted
People to come and talk to my face
Instead of firing cannonballs
Behind my back

Honesty’s brutal
But lies cut deeper than sharpened blades
That form a heavy cross
I can’t bear that

Pre-chorus:
Be straightforward
Tell me if there is any problem
Go ahead and open
Your mouth
Ever heard of civilly?
When we put away rivalry?
You choose passivity
And you feel proud

Chorus:
Coward
You let hell break loose
My kindness was yours to abuse
But in case you forgot, truce
Has to be between both sides
Sour
Was the aftertaste of your words
Salt covered insults cannot be untold
I can’t just bury them under the floor
For the sake of your pride

V2:
I’ve learned that
In the heat of the moment
Bottled up feelings explode
Burning like lye

Hidden truths
The seal of delicacy is broken
And there’s little you gotta decode
Nothing you hear is lie

Pre-chorus:
Ever heard of civilly?
When we put away rivalry?
You choose passivity
And you feel proud
Chorus

Bridge:
It’s communication
Not interrogation
You misinterpret everything
In your head
If you knew how to express
You wouldn’t make such a mess
But you did
Baby you did
And it cannot be fixed
By only me

Chorus