Hi,
If you like the verse melody (piano)...get in touch...
my voice is a bit off, I ain't no singer...but if you like the instrumental
And you reckon you can come up with a memorable, simple, emotional, chorus...I need you
...I have some lyrics that may need to be improved...something more hip...
My main NEED is a chorus Hook melody.... comes in at 34 secs...from the soundcloud file
My voice is rough now...but I can send phrasing for verse melody....
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hanks
Lyrics are below
https://soundcloud.com/joecc/siop-musical-ideawav/s-Z5HxDfGQukpStill In One Piece
Lately…I been thinkin’…
Where we been?.… // good times, bad times.. where’ll I begin?
cause’ Like the changin’ moon I went through a phase
A late-night, free-wheel game, that made you run you away
I held up my hand…5
Ya gave me another chance
It’s true, we were bleedin’
But our love was still breathin’
We’re still together IN ONE PIECE___
We are one, and one’s complete….
Some days there wasn’t a single sound
Just silence between us, pullin’ us down
But time found us reasons…reasons deep within
Findin’ the thing, the best thing we missed
Feelin’ somethin’ again
Touchin’ again and again
Touchin’ one another, like we never touched before
We’re still together IN ONE PIECE___
We are one, one is complete….
We’re still together IN ONE PIECE
Nothin’ in this world.. could break us
When we’re still in one, still in one… STILL IN ONE PIECE….
Rough times can fall to the side
Sometimes it feels right, turnin’ a blind eye
(chorus )
