Hi everybody, here is my almost pre-final demo "Mental Disorder"
I need criticism and your opinion.
https://soundcloud.com/arthursatine/mental-disorderMENTAL DISORDER
Chemistry & hatred, meaningless grasp.
Hate you and you hate me, so today is the last
Ask me to forgive ya, fuck you, listen to your friends
Genius not genuine - how our story ends
Pre
Lied you always lied
Hate you
Nothing to hide
Get away
Nothing to say
Yes I'm a psycho
It's ok
Chorus
Hello my mental disorder
My memory's dead moreover
I'm turning pale like I'm sober
Symbolise it, knives are honed
I'm just doing what I want
Verse 2
I put on my best dress spectra and lights
The leopard can't change his spots
Misery lies
Ask me to forgive ya, sorry can you disappear?
You can’t no longer fuck with
With Erlin Roe (alter ego)
Chorus
Hello my mental disorder
My memory's dead moreover
I'm turning pale like I'm sober
Symbolise it, knives are honed
I'm just doing what I want
Hello my mental disorder
My memory's dead moreover
I'm turning pale like I'm sober
Symbolise it, knives are honed
I'm just doing what I want
Bridge
Want to trash! No one's gonna get it, come on, let's forget it
Asylum is ready, treasure me so very
Want to trash! No one's gonna have it, come on, let's forget it
Asylum is ready, treasure me so very
Mental
Mental
Hello
Mental Hello
Chorus
Hello my mental disorder
My memory's dead moreover
I'm turning pale like I'm sober
Symbolise it, knives are honed
I'm just doing what I want
I'm just doing what I want
I'm sober
I'm just doing what I want
I'm sober