Make love stay

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shadowfax

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« on: September 04, 2020, 11:21:50 AM »
Bit of a sloppy ballad... 8) :)

https://soundcloud.com/knmac/make-love-stay-by-knmac

Your whispering my name,
but I know,
it's just a game,
I'm lonely when your gone,
but i know your love,
will linger on,
now i know,
what you need,
a lovers game,
with no soul,
and i know,
when your gone,
what you leave with me, will never go,

Make love stay,
don't leave me now,
don't walk away, 
Make love stay,
don't leave me now,
don't walk away,

My world is turning upside down,
and my head is spinning round,
you took my world away,
so I will do what you command,
I want our love to stay,


Make love stay,
don't leave me now,
don't walk away, 
Make love stay,
don't leave me now,
don't walk away,

your whispering my name,
but I know it's just a game,


Make love stay,
don't leave me now,
don't walk away, 
Make love stay,
don't leave me now,
don't walk away, ©KNmac
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« Reply #1 on: September 04, 2020, 12:58:42 PM »
Hola @shadowfax

It's a really love song! All the sound is great and the level of the voice is perfect. very beautiful track.

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« Reply #2 on: September 04, 2020, 01:20:25 PM »
It's just sloppy enough @shadowfax .....a classic love song. Great vocals and harmonies.
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« Reply #3 on: September 04, 2020, 04:10:41 PM »
I thought we were heading into the first time ever I saw your face there for a second 😚

Love it @shadowfax 🥰

I love a good old fashioned smoocher ( that’s a song you kiss to in Glasgow 😄)and this one build to the chorus and then SOARS 🥰🥰🥰🥰

Loving the drum flourishes as well 😜

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« Reply #4 on: September 04, 2020, 04:37:40 PM »
Sloppy or soppy? :P

Lovely little tune there, Shadow.

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« Reply #5 on: September 07, 2020, 10:26:53 AM »
Fabulous hooky chorus, fabulous harmonies. It's a cracking piece of work, nothing more to say.

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« Reply #6 on: September 07, 2020, 06:47:41 PM »
Another excellent piece Kev - You're a master of these power ballads. Fabulous vocal performance, playing and production and a killer hooky chorus for sure. Top stuff

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« Reply #7 on: September 07, 2020, 06:50:40 PM »
I got an 80's vibe from this. But also a 2000's Michael Jackson vibe. 
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« Reply #8 on: September 12, 2020, 01:51:35 PM »
Kev,

You're at it again! Great tune, vocal and instrumentation. Perfect production as ever. My only criticism is that the lyrics are a little unimaginative although everything is nicely rhymed and scanned.

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« Reply #9 on: September 12, 2020, 02:47:52 PM »
I agree with everyone else so far. It's a beautiful piece. Sure, a bit sappy, but that's okay with me. I love it. I really love those harmonies on the chorus. The whole thing is tight and well done. I really, really like the sound.

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« Reply #10 on: September 13, 2020, 07:23:46 AM »
Must be the Pandemic.  Seems like everyone is doing phenomenal songs right now.  I have high expectations from any song that comes from you, and this one exceeded all my expectations.
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« Reply #11 on: September 13, 2020, 03:17:25 PM »
Hi @shadowfax

I think this is a really lovely song with a great melody and a really strong chorus. As usual a great production that really accentuates the great vocals and lyrics.

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« Reply #12 on: September 13, 2020, 08:48:02 PM »
Wonderful stuff Kevin.
I'll confess I haven't listened to one of yours for a while.
You just get better.
Love the piano and guitar(?) interaction which marks the song. Work nicely together.
Great chorus as ever.
All superbly done and finely judged arrangement.
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« Reply #13 on: September 14, 2020, 08:11:06 AM »

 Excellent song, as usual Kev ;D.  Lovely feel.  I'm a sucker for 'love lost' melancholy, and this got me right in gut.  Great lyrics ;D
 Beautiful production, and that 'haunting' vocal is just right...

 Love it ;D ;D ;D



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« Reply #14 on: September 17, 2020, 08:20:32 PM »
A great couple of listens mate! That's a huge X Factor winners song chorus right there! I actually got some glitter in my eye!🤪🤣

I love the music and all that crashing at 2.40ish....I love the drums BUT I thought the snare sounded buried in places.

Anyway....really great job dude! We need to collaborate!😜🎶👊🏻🎶