Tides - Second original song

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« Reply #15 on: August 21, 2020, 09:28:55 AM »
I don't believe this song needs improving 8), if this song was played by Dire straights it would not be out of place, love your guitar work and the song has a nice chorus...for me ..this song is finished and is quite excellent. 8)
well done mate :) 8)
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« Reply #16 on: August 22, 2020, 02:09:01 PM »
I’ve listened to this several times now...it’s a truly exceptional song... the playing the art arrangement and the lyrics...it’s a work of art

I’m a fan 😍

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« Reply #18 on: August 26, 2020, 06:22:56 PM »
I’ve listened to this several times now...it’s a truly exceptional song... the playing the art arrangement and the lyrics...it’s a work of art

I’m a fan 😍
Wow, thanks a lot! That means so much to me!
I don't believe this song needs improving 8), if this song was played by Dire straights it would not be out of place, love your guitar work and the song has a nice chorus...for me ..this song is finished and is quite excellent. 8)
well done mate :) 8)
Those are very kind words, man!
Very motivating that you think so!

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« Reply #19 on: August 26, 2020, 06:50:04 PM »
I want to add my encouragement for your vocals. Get over the shyness. Be bold. You sound good. When you're mixing, think of your voice as that of someone else, don't bog down in your negative imaginings when listening to your own voice.

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« Reply #20 on: August 26, 2020, 08:50:02 PM »

 Hi,

 Great track.  Really enjoyed the vid, especially the parts of you playing, and the close ups of the guitar......lovely, aint they ;D

 Loved the playing. Nice relaxed/confident style, which made the whole act a most enjoyable experience.  Loved it  ;D

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« Reply #21 on: September 07, 2020, 12:43:38 AM »
I want to add my encouragement for your vocals. Get over the shyness. Be bold. You sound good. When you're mixing, think of your voice as that of someone else, don't bog down in your negative imaginings when listening to your own voice.
Thank you! I will try to heed your advice, but it's much harder for me to work with my voice as opposed to my guitar playing.

 Hi,

 Great track.  Really enjoyed the vid, especially the parts of you playing, and the close ups of the guitar......lovely, aint they ;D

 Loved the playing. Nice relaxed/confident style, which made the whole act a most enjoyable experience.  Loved it  ;D

Thank you for checking this out! Glad you liked the close-ups of the guitar, it means a lot to me!
Thank you for the encouraging words!

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« Reply #22 on: September 07, 2020, 06:54:43 PM »
I remember your first song! You're still good!!
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« Reply #23 on: September 10, 2020, 11:06:49 AM »
This is great! Fun song and great playing. Turn up the vocals a bit! I liked the video but I am still nervous from seeing that cup of coffee sitting unstably on your amp!