[Paulski]

Really a great musical treatment to a pretty good lyric. Did you have to tweek the lyric any, or did you just mold and fold the melody in a wrap around the standing words?
In any event, the finished song is superb.......a real good collab!!

Oh......and love the little fan in the (a)jar ;-)

Cheers Tom @IronKnee yes there was quite a bit of lyrical tweaking. Appreciate the kind words

Hi Paul,
As others have said, it's great to see you playing and singing. I concur with what others have said about your talent. There can be no doubt. I was quite surprised that you hadn't written the lyrics - they sound like the type you write. The marriage of the chord changes and the melody is beautifully done and they lent an interest to the song which a lesser musician wouldn't have achieved. What more can I say that I haven't said before - a joy to the ears.
M

Thanks Alan @montydog - very kind of you to say that. Glad you enjoyed it

Paul

[shadowfax]

And the quality just keeps on coming, how does one crit perfection? there are peeps writing for West end musicals that are not up to your standard my friend.