@CaliaMoko - again the paredbackness , yes that is a word, I just invented it...exposes a number of things.
1. the clever words over a simple rhymic Pattern.
2. The meaning of the lyric is much easier for me to swallow.
3. The melodic movement.
I’m loving this challenge, space is such a good thing in music, I also like the onetakeness (oh theres another one...)
@MichaelA - Again, touches of Northern Billy Bragg, yip it reminds me of my under 11’s, with the over serious Dads.
Superb stuff, lovely picking