[Jo ash]

Hello everyone, this is the original lyrics I wrote some months ago. A friend wrote the music and sang it playing the piano. It's a simple demo, and I'm pitching it already. Whoever is interested should contact me... But first, please listen and comment. Thanks... in advance.

https://soundcloud.com/daniel-belmont-3/12-a-little-love/recommended

[simonjol]

@joeash

that's a pretty melody and interesting lyric i like it. I can hear it as a very simple and delicate production, just a minimal electric rhodes piano and a female vocal perhaps that builds with some subtle orchestral arrangement.

just ideas, all the best with it

[Arthur_Satine]

I like your voice! There is a lack of dynamics. In some places it reminded me of Hallelujah by Leonard Cohen. With good production, this will sound so good!