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Black Station Wagon

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rightly:
Quality stuff again.
No knits from me.

My favourite line has to be.

It was the weekend that pushed me too far



Great.

moraamarolaloba:
A perfect classic!!!!

I like how you describe though the lyrics that story @montydog
A very pleasant and elegant track!! The organ sounds great as well as the wind instruments!!

cowparsleyman:
@montydog - Love this one, I just imagined walking into a blues bar, and your band was playing this, just like old times, all smokey, hot and the smell of beer, lovely slide guitar. Nothing to add except would love to play the solo on this.

Has a bit of Van the Man in it...

Doesn't sound the same "He drove a Vauxhall Viva 1.6L Estate" does it?

PeteS:
Great song Alan, definite laid back bluesy feel.

Like it!

Bostonfan2:
Nicely done! Rhythm flows with a nice shuffle, lead guitar & sax are fitting great
here. As mentioned your baritone suits the theme & story perfectly, I dig it :)

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