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Unclenny:
Being in between projects I spent some time looking back at some of the songs that I have on my back pages. I actually like many of them.  ;)

I came across this interesting thing that I wrote five years ago. My wife was in the hospital with a pretty serious problem that the docs were struggling to figure out. It all ended well but it was a pretty stressful few days. One night I got home late from the hospital and was too worked up to sleep....so I wrote and tracked this song.

Hemolytic Blood Loss Blues
https://www.soundclick.com/music/songInfo.cfm?songID=13074981

Save me from this hemolytic fever
Save me from these blood loss blues
Save me
Then we'll see if I can't save you

Save me and I'll be a believer
If you stop this bleeding
Then I'll even pay my dues
Save me
Then we'll see if I can't save you

My heart is bleeding
Yes it has been abused
But part of it is still beating
Listen to it
And show me how to use it

Save me
Save me
Save me from these blood loss blues
Save me
Save me
Save me from these hemolytic blood loss blues

My heart is bleeding
Yes it has been abused
And the part of it that's still beating
Has the hemolytic blood loss blues

moraamarolaloba:
Hola @Unclenny
I really like the song, the sound has a great warmth and the guitar pannong clothe the song very cleverly.
I love this phrase
Listen to it
And show me how to use it

and the chorus

Unclenny:
Hola Mora! @moraamarolaloba ....thank you for giving this one a listen and for your appreciation.  :D

moraamarolaloba:

--- Quote from: Unclenny on July 01, 2020, 12:53:24 PM ---Hola Mora! @moraamarolaloba ....thank you for giving this one a listen and for your appreciation.  :D

--- End quote ---

You are welcome, it's good to comment on a song like this one inspired on so heavy moments when everything goes well!!
Be safe!

rightly:
I read the lyrics n really liked them.
Really enjoyed the listen, just a great sound.
Powerful brew of conventional n new.
Your voice has a take it or leave it quality to it.

Best thing I’ve heard in a while.

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