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Alien genre challenge - Bad Dog WIP

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MichaelA:
Hi @Paulski , I was actually most amused by your banjo intro, then the translation of it into the heavier genre. I wouldn't know if it was metal or not, but it's very gritty and mean. Are we allowed a chorus in this kind of thing? -  or sectional twist, as after you've enjoyed the genre switch then the heavier section could do with a lift or change I think to maintain maximum interest.

Great stuff so far though  ;)

alcapone_dudu:
That was a trip!

Interesting work but in my opinion you should find a way to smoothen the change between the banjo part and the metal part. I think this would give the some balance.

Thanks for sharing!

Arthur_Satine:
Oh my god, that's sick! I love the second part of the song, sounds glitchy. So many emotions, just crazy in a best way.

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