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New Song - The Dreamroad (feat MizAgata)

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Grubstar

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« on: June 21, 2020, 05:29:09 PM »
Hi, here’s a new song that we’ve just completed featuring a female singer MizAgata who has occasionally provided the vocals on a number of our songs.

The Dreamroad is quite a bittersweet song which we tried to write with just enough ambiguity in the verses to allow the listener (hopefully) to use their own imagination as to what is going on in the narrative.

The chorus is of course a simple metaphor for life touching upon love, redemption and the passage of time.

I hope you all enjoy it and I look forward to any comments.

https://soundcloud.com/grubstar1/the-dreamroad


The Dreamroad

I got a letter from a friend
Someone I once held dear
It’s the beginning or the end
She didn’t make it clear

I thought about it for a while
Where did it all go wrong?
The past can fade just like a smile
But never lasts too long

It’s not too late to change
Before we grow too old
Life’s never easy when you step
Upon the Dreamroad
It’s not worth crying
If we find it’s only fool’s gold
Love sometimes leaves you If you slip
Upon the Dreamroad

I’ve seen the face behind the veil
The coldness in her eyes
The story of a cruel betrayal
That nothing could disguise

I heard the sirens in the night
Howling from the cold
So many stories yet to write
Must now remain untold

It’s not too late to change
Before we grow too old
Life’s never easy when you step
Upon the Dreamroad
It’s not worth crying
If we find it’s only fool’s gold
Love sometimes leaves you If you slip
Upon the Dreamroad

It’s not too late
It’s not worth crying

© 2020 Atkin & Williams




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« Reply #1 on: June 21, 2020, 08:14:19 PM »
I liked this a lot guys. Great lyrics up to interpretation as you say. It's got a poppy, early 80s vibe which you seem to pull off very well. Great vocals, instrumentation and production. Well done all  :)

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« Reply #2 on: June 21, 2020, 10:27:02 PM »
Hi there Grubstar, very slick, positive and driving synth pop.  It reminded me a bit of early Pet Shop Boys.  The vocalist has a good voice for this kind of thing.  Some nice counter melodies come in towards the end too and the chorus has just the right amount of wind beneath its wings.
It's all too beautiful.

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« Reply #3 on: June 22, 2020, 09:04:42 AM »
Very nice - definitely Atkin and Williams with a touch of the Bangles. Great 80s synths and melodic arrangements. Nice "impressionist" lyrics too (also very 80s I think) which open the door a little on a potential backstory (or do they?) and just somehow sound good together.
Very enjoyable.

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« Reply #4 on: June 22, 2020, 11:26:49 AM »
Hola @Grubstar

Your song is really well produced, the arrangement and mix goes fine ant he singer is wonderful!!!
 I think your song could go well on any platform, its construction is perfect and the chorus is very well applied and developed . :)
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« Reply #5 on: June 22, 2020, 02:56:23 PM »
Excellent song, in my opinion. Nice contrast between the positive vibe of the music and the rather sad lyrics. Beautiful singing! I can easily imagine it a big radio hit, with a chorus that sticks to you instantly, like superglue.

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« Reply #6 on: June 22, 2020, 07:02:42 PM »
What a fab song, love the vocal and the close harmonies in the chorus...all round fabness, production, arrangement..just super, :) 8)
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« Reply #7 on: June 23, 2020, 01:03:51 AM »
This is so cool. as mentioned above I also got a Bangles vibe (which I love)
very nice voice, lyrics & melody all shine with a tight groove that holds it together.
Nice addition for the playlist :)

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« Reply #8 on: June 26, 2020, 03:42:26 PM »
Many thanks to all those who gave our song a listen and particular thanks to those who took the time out to comment in particular;


@pompeyjazz Many thanks PJ your comments and kind words are appreciated.

@PaulyX  Cheers mate, thanks a lot for the positive comments.

@adamfarr Hi Adam, thanks again for the support and kind words.

@moraamarolaloba      Hola Mora, many thanks, your review it is much appreciated.

@The Estuary (SWE)  Cheers man, thanks for the great comments.

@shadowfax  Hi SF thanks for the great review  it really measn a lot.

@Bostonfan2 So glad that you liked the song and thanks for taking time to make such positive comments.


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« Reply #9 on: June 27, 2020, 08:04:20 AM »
Sort of Pet Shop Boys meets Bangles, me like. Only two comments re the mix, think the vocals could come up a bit and overall the mix is a little light on low end, not sure i it the mix or simply the instrumentation lacking a bit in the low end. Really catchy and great vocals, well done!

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« Reply #10 on: June 30, 2020, 04:48:40 PM »
@Jambrains Thanks for taking the time to review our song it is much appreciated also thanks for the comments regarding the mix Its an area I am always trying to improve on, so thanks for the feedback.

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« Reply #11 on: July 01, 2020, 03:59:52 PM »
@Grubstar
Hi, really well constructed and recorded song with a great vocal. Got an 80's feel as others said and I too thought of the Bangles and Pet Shop Boys, nice company to keep! I think the vocals could come up a bit and also push the bass end a bit more!

Nice one!

Cheers
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« Reply #12 on: July 05, 2020, 08:47:11 PM »
Yeah...really love this one...right up my street!

Still a great 80's feel to it...but I think the brilliant female lead vocal gives it a more contemporary appeal too.

I don't want to ramble off into some long-winded bollocks except to say that I loved it!
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« Reply #13 on: July 09, 2020, 04:06:59 PM »
@PaulAds@Jamie
Hi guys, many thanks to both of you for the positive reviews, it is much appreciated. Cheers.

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« Reply #14 on: July 10, 2020, 08:23:07 AM »
Agree with the comments regarding Bangles and Pet Shop Boys, very solid and catchy 80s pop vibe, well done

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